first cut of latest poem

Latest poem is on http://chaoasandmatter.blogspot.com

I jotted it into a notepad application for ideas. It had no name yet. The only edits were to remove the unnecessary

original:

Memory is time
and love is the building of memory
the man sitting by the well
fails to distinguish times
and misses his appointments
including one with death
that he escaped by unnecessary
dithering the heart and the soul of it
the electric pool of Aid Schick
or the grusome hand taking grasp
of what you considered yours

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